Spring to soundless and stirless are blossoming flowers, is her breeze blows, is her footsteps. The light fragrance of flowers, is her use of ng, I saw her figure, I heard her footsteps, I smell her is coming, who is she? She is spring, spring is coming!
修改後：
Spring is coming quietly. The blossoming flowers are her figures. The blowing breeze is her footstep. The fragrance of flowers is her perfume. I can see her figures, hear her footstep and smell her breath. The spring is coming.
修改老師： Crystal老師五年級:孫甜甜