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Spring is a very good season. It's the first season of the year. Spring is beautiful. There is a Chinese saying:Make your whole year's plan in the spring and the whole day's plan in the morning. We should save more time to study hard. But to tell the truth, the weather in spring isn't very good. The weather is sometimes like summer and sometimes like winter. In the morning, it's very cold. At noon, it's much hotter. But it doesn't matter, I still like spring. Spring is a season for children. The flowers are colorful and the grass is green. Plants are everywhere. You can see bees, butterflies and other insects dancing. Everything is growing. In spring, children can fly kites, play football, and ride bicycles. And I can do some activities too. Let’s welcome spring by a warm hug.
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