Thespringwindisblowngreenwillow,thewindinthehotsummer,the
autumnwindblowingyellowrice,winterwindblowingthewhiteearth,awind
blowingupmysoul.
Theexamiseverystudentworkachievementexhibition,performanceof
thedirectimpactonstudents'rfinalexam,transcriptsofhomethat
day,I'mdisappointedurgently,myEnglishresultis78points,afterreadingthe
report,Iwillnottoutterasinglewordtolieinbed,staringattheceiling......I
donotknowhowlongafter,thedoorsuddenlyopened,mothercameinand
satdownbesideme,notlookingatme,suddenly,onmymotherangrily
shouted:"youstayinbeddoing?Youfailedtheexamisyoudon'tworkhard,
canthisstrangewho......"Waitingforhertofinish,Icried.
Tiredofcrying,todrythetears,othersaw
myheartcalmdown,shealsorestoredthetruecolours,sayaffectionatelyto
me:"theexamisimportant,butyoursubjectiveeffortismoreimportant,as
longasyoutryyourbest,yourlifeisno'.'"......"Myeyesarebright,spiritlifts,
islikethewind,takemybadmoodwas
ing,mymindblowingafresh.
修改後：
Exams are often used to check students' learning result during a period, so the scores always directly impactonstudents'mood.
After the finalexam, I felt nervous every day. When I received the final transcript,I was totally disappointed. I only got 78points in my English test. I lay on the bed without saying asingleword. I started staringattheceiling. I did notknowhowlong it lasted, suddenly, my mother came in and sat down beside me. She said to me angrily, "What are you doing here? Why you lie on the bed? You failed the exam because you don't work hard... " I kept silent and waited for her to
finish, and then Icried.
Tiredofcrying,Idried thetears and saw I have calmed down,shesaid affectionatelyto me, "The exam is very important, and you must try your best to work hard. Then you can have a better future..." My eyeswere turning bright and I felt confident again. I made up my mind to work harder and never give up.
修改老師：Crystal 老師
國一:張瑞洋